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Post by Asuka Was Here on Aug 14, 2006 20:19:27 GMT -5
The concept of this just struck me as cute, what with Ryuhou being injured for some reason another and talking to Kanami while he recuperates and she doodles to keep him company. If you can't read the labels on her drawing, they say "Kazu-kun" "Me" and "Ryu-kun" reading left-to-right. The boards... I have an explaination for their crookedness. Just to point it out, I could have just as easily drawn them all perfectly straight and such with a ruler, but they live in the Lost Ground. Which is like... totally lacking in technology. I doubt they havd giant board-processing plants to make perfectly identical, straight-edged boards. And they can't exactly import them, so they probably just hack up any reasonably straight chunk of wood in the vicinity when they build new houses. ...Or at least that was the premise when I started. Somehow, though, I ended up having too much fun drawing lines and the boards ended up all crooked and odd. I kind of liked it from an artistic perspective, so I just left it. Sue me I heart Kanami's hair, but it's so huge that you can't even see the rest of her head ^^ That poor girl must have a hell of a time brushing it. I tried out coloring it without inking it; I'm not sure about the results. Comments & crits always appreciated ^^
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Post by orochimaruchan on Aug 14, 2006 20:50:01 GMT -5
His right arm's a little long and his neck looks weird, isn't Ryuho a lot bigger than Kanami. Her hair is really nice though.
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Post by Asuka Was Here on Aug 14, 2006 21:00:30 GMT -5
Yes, I know about the arm -.-' It drove me crazy until I finally just left it *sigh* His neck's a little wide, but I dunno what else is wrong.
Kanami is smaller than Ryuhou ^^ He clothes are just flippin' huge, so unless you have the two of them standing up, it's hard to tell. If you compare her body length to Ryuhou's, though, I did draw her shorter - Kanami's head-to-knees length is only equivalent to Ryuhou's head-to-thighs, and shorter if you take into account Kanami's hair sticking up a few inches. She's just doomed to look bigger because of that outfit. ... seriously, why is that thing so wide and baggy?
Glad you like her hair. I had fun coloring it. And drawing it. And so forth. I just like drawing long hair ^^ Kanami's especially, since it has those big twists and little curls and stuff.
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Autumn
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Mimori X Ryuho
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Post by Autumn on Aug 15, 2006 7:13:39 GMT -5
Cute idea! The coloring looks great! Kanami looks pretty good, but Ryuho looks......strange. Maybe it's because he's smiling. I suppose Kanami just got done mopping the floor with his hair and he's happy that its over? Or does he gain gratification from being a diwty mop and is just laying there sighing in satisfaction? The world may never know.
To keep the nasty pedos at bay :3
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Post by Asuka Was Here on Aug 15, 2006 7:42:22 GMT -5
Yeah, I know -.-' I blame it on having more practice drawing Kanami. Ummm... I was going to say he was happy because he was feeling better and he had Kanami to keep him company, but I like your version better. ^^ To keep the nasty pedos at bay :3 ...Because they can't find her inside that outfit? No matter how you slice it, it's still HUGE.
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