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|  | More art « Thread Started on Dec 20, 2005, 8:07am » | |
Okay, not sure if this should have gone in the s-CRY-ed part, but anyways, a slightly odd looking Kanami >.>;;
![[image]](http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y295/Kairi18/Kanami-chan.jpg) And a slightly gory and depressed looking ninja which is out of my strange head o.o;;
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|  | Re: More art « Reply #2 on Dec 21, 2005, 5:17pm » | |
Aww, it's Kanami! And you did a good job of capturing her happy-go-lucky-little-kid-type attitude. She looks like she's having an, "OMG! Kazu-kun is over there!!!!" moment ^.^ Would you mind if I put up the Kanami picture in the fan art section of Drastic? I'll credit you, of course, to your email, website, or forums profile, whichever you prefer (or all, if you want). I hate to beg like this, but we really need fan art...
Anyway, you've done a good job of improving your character's poses; they don't look so rigid now, which is nice to see. Next time around, you might want to work on proportions - the heads are too big and the arms are too short. The fingertips should come down to about mid-thigh, and the head should be roughly half the width of the shoulders - unless you're going for the chibi look; but even if you're not, having the head a bit large is usually acceptable in anime style. It's the arms that are really out of proportion.
Also, I think the depressed-gory-ninja has a good concept; I especially love how you have a handprint in the pool of blood, it's a great detail and it makes it look as if she's been sititng there dazed for awhile, long enough for the blood to start thinkening a little. She better get out of there soon, though, or else someone'll catch her...
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|  | Re: More art « Reply #3 on Dec 21, 2005, 7:08pm » | |
Yeah, that's totally what she's thinking!
And thanks again for Aurora! It's great advice! I'd be so honoured if you would put Kanami there! That would be so awesome! Feel free to do so! n_n
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|  | Re: More art « Reply #4 on Dec 25, 2005, 10:50am » | |
Glad you find it helpful ^.^ Awesome, thanks! I'll include her in my next update... which will probably be a day or two after Chrismas. If I'm not too busy shopping for new manga and art supplies with my money ^.^'
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